Today's feature, chapters and more about life

Today, I will feature my brother GiantCaliber. He just recently joined dA (after months of me telling him to get one) and still has no deviations posted yet. However, I would like to highly encourage you to read his story and critique it for him because being new, he doesn't have any connections to get the word out. Being the big sister, I want to do whatever I can to help.
He is writing a story and here is the link to chapter 1:
fav.me/d5pae8f

I swear, the way he does things is so similar to me and I don't think he's read my past journals when I posted my chapters. FYI I still am working on my chapters, just slowly, for myself and the very very few who keep up with it. I really wish I could get the word out but most people are too busy to read what could possibly be a good story. If you are very very nice and would like to critique me, here is the link:
chapter 1:
happylilsquirrel.deviantart.co…
chapter 2: happylilsquirrel.deviantart.co…
I even wrote a song that is one of the themes: www.youtube.com/watch?v=wrLEnE…

If you can help both of us out, a huge giant massive thank you for you from me

and... life is good. I went sledding and got snow in mah face > _ < it was so fun. this is what you get when a girl from Japan who lived in Hawaii most of her life is sent to the snow