On the Verge of Defeat...?

Errrrrrr... I can"t think of a good title. It does sound cheesy, doesn"t it?
This is a drawing from my manga I've been working on for a while. Although I haven't finished a single page of chapter 1 lol
I decided to start over after doing 10 pages since my story sounded stupid.
I like the drawing a lot, actually. I enjoy drawing evil characters and injured characters. And the way I drew their hair was inspired by Deathnote. I added a background on photoshop but the original drawing has a plain white background.