happylilsquirrel

In no means am I an awesome story teller. But the people around me made me realize, everyone makes up stories in their head. they have that one story they spend years thinking about. but it's all in their head. you think you're the only one that does this but actually, a lot of people do. they have no intention to publish it and most people are somewhat embarrassed and think their story is dumb. in fact, I'd be embarrassed to show most people I know in real life my stories. I think that they would think I'm dumb and weird. What is it about online anonymity that makes me want people to read it and talk about it? as far as I know, only 2 people

info: 1000 points for a full color manga style illustration with background 1000 for semi realistic illustration 500 for just character, no background if you have special requests, let me know and I can give you a bid. I also accept stuff like amazon gift cards equivalent to the points value or paypal. I also do art trades. virtual hugs to anyone who decides to help out this college kid trying to survive :) I'll make it worth the price, trust me :)

I made some pretty important changes to chapter 2 and wrote chapter 3. critique on these drafts would be really really awesome! this story has been in my head for a long time and it'd be nice to have somebody to talk about it with. hopefully chp. 3 is not too short for the wait, but yeah,.. don't worry, chapter 4 should come out soon, but first, i need your input so problems can be fixed early on. for those of you that are new, chp. 1 is here: http://happylilsquirrel.deviantart.com/journal/Revised-chp-1-draft-still-could-use-criticism-329684821 -chapter 2 "Unexpected Encounters" (approx. 100 years later) Shin (now all grown up into a "yo